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Saje

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keyodie said:
How do you like my banners? I know they don't look very good, so can you tell me how I can improve? Thanks! (On the last three ones, the pictures are all the same)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v306/Keyodie1/chocolatefactorybanner.gif

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v306/Keyodie1/keirabannejpg.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v306/Keyodie1/avrilbanner1.gif

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v306/Keyodie1/avrilbanner2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v306/Keyodie1/avrilbanner3.gif

So...how do you like'em or hate'em?
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Ok I'll be honest.... they are lovely but there are a few things I would change.

The first one has way too much going on. Too many pictures and too much 'noise' Plus there are things on their faces.

The second one is great but I'd put the face on the right in the middle since it is stronger. And I wouldn't put writing across her face.

Third one is just about right (for me). I'd move her face up so you get more eyes/nose/lips and less forehead on both the one on the right and left.

The only thing I don't like on the fourth one is the font. I think a thinner, darker font that is more spread out would be nice.

The last one I don't really like the background or the font over the faces. Why don't you make her name bigger and then tuck it behind the faces so only some of it is visible. You know. Enough to read but not too overpowering.

Hope that's ok. YOu're very talented but if you ask me to critique I will! LOL.
 
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Saje said:
Ok I'll be honest.... they are lovely but there are a few things I would change.

The first one has way too much going on. Too many pictures and too much 'noise' Plus there are things on their faces.

The second one is great but I'd put the face on the right in the middle since it is stronger. And I wouldn't put writing across her face.

Third one is just about right (for me). I'd move her face up so you get more eyes/nose/lips and less forehead on both the one on the right and left.

The only thing I don't like on the fourth one is the font. I think a thinner, darker font that is more spread out would be nice.

The last one I don't really like the background or the font over the faces. Why don't you make her name bigger and then tuck it behind the faces so only some of it is visible. You know. Enough to read but not too overpowering.

Hope that's ok. YOu're very talented but if you ask me to critique I will! LOL.
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lol those banners are the sucky ones...the more recent ones are much better! :D And thanks for the advice!
 
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Ok here are some more I made:






and another one I'm proud of is Dakotah's siggy...hehe (And I would put a smiley here but it counts as an image)
 
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You are really good at this, keyo!And are you just making them b/c you are bored??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??*eyes you suspiciously*
 
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