Calling all artsy chazzers

[corgipower]

Need help with some editing of a picture.

This is the original:



These are what I came up with:







None of them are quite right...sigh...

I'm open to other alterations entirely, but I do kinda like having the dog pop out with the rest faded but not invisible.

This is for a logo and needs to look good small on keychains and big on tote bags and such.

You can't PM me, but I am on FB or if you post here, I'll PM you with my email addy. I am willing to pay for the efforts of someone more talented than I.