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Old 08-01-2012, 02:35 AM
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Default Could/Would/Should Have - my writing

With this year being as it has been for me, being much of the time in deep and dark thoughts/energy, having had to deal with suicidal business, my friend's troubles, my grandfather's decline, and being in a general unbroken pensive/skeptic mood for around 8 months now I needed an outlet of some sort. It has taken the form of a short story collection. The first entry of which I am proud (we'll see about that...) to present to all the good people here on Chazhound =)

It takes the form of the last 3 days of life of a young, seemingly average girl. It starts on the last day and ends on the first. It's structure is abit...different and things may seem abit surreal. I apologize if it's crappy or difficult to read but it's just starting out and I may make edits later - I just really needed to get it out tonight. It isn't going to make it into any literature competitions anytime soon nor is it meant to...it's more of a outlet and therapeutic thing for me.

Thoughts good or bad are appreciated and hope you find it a enjoyable and interesting read =)

http://inugami1112.wordpress.com/2012/08/01/could-have/
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Old 08-01-2012, 03:48 AM
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OMG please move this to fire hydrant >< sorry just noticed posted in wrong forum right now!
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Old 08-01-2012, 01:32 PM
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I anticipate reading! It will be a reward for finishing this week's articles ;-)
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Thanks alot Renee!

Updated - Part two of "Could have"

http://inugami1112.wordpress.com/201...d-have-part-2/
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Old 08-03-2012, 02:13 AM
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Your images are very powerful and vivid!
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Thanks again Renee, the structure of it is rather Vibrant - Grey. As her life comes to a close and things get more desolate things pop out more, become more vibrant, and emotions become more strung up/intense - before things get to that climax, well - you'll see lol.

A few updates on the blog though. - "Would have" coming by the weekend.
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I tend to use my blog for letting work simmer, then going back and doing the final edits after I've looked at it and read any comments there might be. I've taken down a few stories to work on them for inclusion in the book I'm working on right now.
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Oh wow, what kind of book/writing is it? You're really talented =)
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Have a new piece up about my Grandma - read if you have time and hope it's a enjoyable one for you guys =)

http://inugami1112.wordpress.com/201...y-grandmother/
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Oh wow, what kind of book/writing is it? You're really talented =)
I've got a couple in the works -- one's a pure fantasy novel, the other's a hybrid, The Black Dog Dialogues. It started out as a short story, meant to be part of an anthology with another novella that's ready for final editing and a couple of other short stories, but the thing has a life of its own and is already over 40,000 words and still building.

There may have to be a second BDD to accommodate the other novella (which may get expanded; several of the writers in my group have been hounding me to do that) and the short stories.
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