Looking for some honest critiques...

[Brandyb]

I dabbled with some painting years ago, and I am trying to get back into it. I've attached two water colours that I am looking for comments on - sorry, I know one is a fish and not a dog, but I'm hoping that's ok.
I'd like to be able to offer water colour and gouache to my clients for pet portraits once I am comfortable again in the medium. My painting style is very different from my drawing style, and I think it would be neat to be able to add this style for those that like it.
All comments welcome ... thank you very much everyone!